It was a dark rainy day when I found out what happen. My family and me were just coming from L.A.and was having a great time till one of my mom’s parents called and had some very bad news, our house was on fire! That stop everything we were going to do. My little sister starting crying and in the end we all start crying. But the only thing we do not is how did it start?
We have been here about three and a half days. We were going to stay for a week! It seems like we did nothing. My dad tried to get plane tickets back to our house but it would not be till tomorrow till we could get tickets to go back to Wisconsin. But what we did not think of is where are we going to stay? How much it will cost us? What I found funny was why would we do this, but we went out for dinner. We all love the food that they had at their different kinds of places to go for food. It made us forget about our house (At least for a little bit).Then after that we got ice cream and then went to the hotel that we were staying at.
It was a very early morning for us. We all woke up at 4:00 in the morning. My sister was so sad and mad and tired she almost cried the whole time getting back to Wisconsin where our house was. Many people on the plane were getting really mad at my sister and mom said Tom, see if you can make your sister stop crying. I said to my sister Tina what's wrong? She gave me a look saying what do you think? I said back that I am sad too. But after that she said how did the house burn down? I said I don't know. The rest of the time to Wisconsin Tina did not cry and for that question she asked me I was thinking about it for a long time on the way back.
When we got back to Wisconsin my dad’s parents pick us up and drove us back to the house. I was the worst thing I ever have seen. I seem like we were looking at our house for 5 hours but it has only been 5 minutes. At that time my mom and dad asked my parents do you know how it started and they said know.
We all looked around to see if anything made it through and I found one thing and that we my lamp and the paper part of some of my fireworks I had in my bedroom and that is when remembered. When we were about to get going my dad said just keep on the lamp light then no one comes in the house but then I remember that I had some fireworks from last year I saved. And they were next to my books I had in my room. And maybe that is how it started. From that day on I did not say anything
In the end we got a new house which was for sure some waiting but even though we lost everything in our house pretty much but we still had each other.
I like your story line very much. You might want to go back in to do some self-editing - fix up spelling errors and other typos. Good job.
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